Weakness Exposed

Strengths:

• Centering
• Movement
• Water
• Portraits
• Selective Focus

Weakness:

• Lighting
• Background
• Placing of objects

• I think that this composition is successful because it is centered and the action is blurry, but the background it clear which makes it interesting. 
• The thing that makes the lighting work in my eyes is the background goes from darker to lighter.
• The action makes the picture engaging and makes me want to look more in detail.
• The elements that were used are cropping, centering the picture, movement

• I think that this composition is successful because it uses rule of thirds, and it is interesting because of the setting which the girl is in.
• The thing that makes the lighting successful is that the light is going from dark (by the girls head) to light.
• The way that the girl is sitting makes the picture engaging, and what she is sitting in too.
• The elements that were used are rule of thirds

Condition/Emotion

My Redos

For the Masquerade i already re-did this one. you wanted me to re-do it, and i re-did the background of the black and white one.

You asked me to re-do siblings. The original one had bad lighting and a bad background. so i re-did it in the studio this time and fixed the lighting.

Word: Mysterious
Difficult to understand

You wanted me to re-do this for "word". One night it was really foggy out, and i wanted to take a picture.

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